VN Ren'Py A Wife and Mother [P1 v0.152] [Lust & Passion]

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Orochi157

Orochi157

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neronx said:
He follows the arrangements of sex from low to high and you will never wait for an unexpected scene
It's clear right now that you can't wait for a scene of sex in the next phase of Sophia's corruption.
If he does not recognize FootJob as a more corrupt stage than HandJob, at best you can witness BlowJob.
For this reason, he has to lower the quality of the story and distance himself from realism.

For example, in the next event with children or old men, he should show a sex scene that is more intense than the previous updates. It should not necessarily be like this and it hurts the story.

From the beginning, he should not have encouraged Sofia to have sex with everyone in the community during a period of 30 days and at all times, early in the morning, before noon, in the afternoon, and at night.

His story is really locked.


I think you can free the game from this confusion with these two tasks and increase the quality and speed of publication:

1. With a rewrite in the story text, change the events to span different days and weeks instead of being locked at continuous times throughout the day.
The story of the game will be more logical.

2. Remove less attractive characters and clichéd events found in other games (such as Truth Dare) and saturate them in different day-to-day routines.

The following characters are not really attractive in my opinion:
Claire and Marie
Christine and Melanie and elena
Don Marello and Larry Marello

I think it is better that they become normal and everyday characters and not show a special event with them.
Because Dylan and Sophia are not supposed to have sex with everyone in their community.
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I don't think there will be any more scenes with Sophia as a private teacher. He lost his main source of income.
 
OZtheW1ZARD

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Jack Adams said:
When L&P was posing DeShawn for this render he just didn't raise his elbow enough. If he had, the natural rotation would have positioned the hand without the need for forced rotation of the wrist. This is rare for L&P to make this kind of mistake as his posing is usually quite good.
Good catch! Jack.
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Not only that.
The whole arm should be at a different angle. Rise your hand and try to do the same grab.
You will end up with elbow facing up, biceps faced slightly down and palm flat against Sophia chest. Wrists in humans do not rotate, our forearms do. The whole forearm twists - muscles, the two bones there, ligaments. Everything.
This is why you study anatomy as an artist ;)

I suppose this is a drawback of working with ready 3D models, rather than sculpting it yourself. AI faces a lot of similar problems to be honest.
 
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Milky Cow

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MF. said:
At what point in the game would I encounter this content? & spoilers would be appreciated, so I know what to look out for?

Thanks again for sharing that file.
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Can't say precisely. You have to be on the 2nd job route (Tutoring with Myers children). Either you chose it in AWAM1 or pick this choice if you start a new game in AWAM2 and choose to answer few questions.
 
Awamboy

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OZtheW1ZARD said:
My only complaint:

View attachment 3886225

WTF is this arm? Definitely not human because it appears to have rotating wrist :D :D :D


Edit: Human wrist does not rotate, our forearm does. See it yourself.
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I have a perfectly logical explanation, DeBlack dislocated his wrist trying to hold his dick (size and weight issues).

"I'm not a porn star but if I was my name would be: De Dick"
 
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manblu

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Congratulations to the sponsors for this extensive and action-packed development! Now it's time for the handjobs woow keep sponsoring... in 7 years... hahaha they make friends out of their lives, they make the first contact on top of it like something forced there with a girl in the middle that has nothing to do with it... Sofia will have her first sex in a huge orgy..
 
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Ruffles&Lays said:
Bibifoc , Alley_Cat
After all this controversy involving L&P's exclusion from Patreon because of the SHOTA content (Life Model scene), do you think that this part of the game has been definitively abandoned even though L&P is now on Subscribestar?

By the way, I don't even know if that was the real reason for the game's exclusion from Patreon. Was it? I try to follow the thread, but there are so many messages every day that I get lost in the information.

I hope the Life Model scene stays on Subscribestar and maybe Shopie will continue teaching about sex education by showing the last part of its body that hasn't been explored yet: the vagina.

Do you think that's possible or is this part definitively abandoned?
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BUMP!

Can anyone explain where this conversation is headed?
I'm really exhausted from reading hundreds of pages.
 
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Gogo1235

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cloudstrife said:
A better option would have been for Vicky to pull Sophia down to her knees and ask her if she wanted to taste DeShawn's cock, I mean she'd already jerked him off so why not? Then we could have had a scene with both of them sucking him off together with an end choice of either cuming on Vicky's face or on Sophia's face. The hand cum is only sexy if you've got some weird hand fetish, which L&P might well have, he certainly has a fetish for dragging things out
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You need to understand that, in the game, Sophia tries everything with Dylan first and then she moves on to give others the same experience. If she hasn't given Dylan a BJ there is no way she gives a BJ to anyone else. What you said would have been better than what we got but it was improbable. One more scenario could have been this, Sophia jerking off DeShawn while Vicky is waiting for cum on her face, and at the very last moment when DeShawn is about to cum, Vicky directs his cock towards Sophia's face, and later on cleaning it by kissing her.

There are endless possibilities but we get what we get.
 
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LSC82

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Gogo1235 said:
You need to understand that, in the game, Sophia tries everything with Dylan first and then she moves on to give others the same experience. If she hasn't given Dylan a BJ there is no way she gives a BJ to anyone else. What you said would have been better than what we got but it was improbable. One more scenario could have been this, Sophia jerking off DeShawn while Vicky is waiting for cum on her face, and at the very last moment when DeShawn is about to cum, Vicky directs his cock towards Sophia's face, and later on cleaning it by kissing her.

There are endless possibilities but we get what we get.
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This thing that now Sophia is in "handjob stage" is quite annoying, because we essentially get the same thing over and over and over... with no sense of progression.

It would make sense if she kept getting hornier and with her morals becoming loser with each action... and needing more and more to get her fix... but that is not the best milking tactic, so we get this rinse and repeat.
 
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dan_roger69

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LSC82 said:
This thing that now Sophia is in "handjob stage" is quite annoying, because we essentially get the same thing over and over and over... with no sense of progression.

It would make sense if she kept getting hornier and with her morals becoming loser with each action... and needing more and more to get her fix... but that is not the best milking tactic, so we get this rinse and repeat.
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She hasn't been horny for the past 7 years. Her only job is give us Blue Balls
 
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GokutheG

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Ruffles&Lays said:
Bibifoc , Alley_Cat
After all this controversy involving L&P's exclusion from Patreon because of the SHOTA content (Life Model scene), do you think that this part of the game has been definitively abandoned even though L&P is now on Subscribestar?

By the way, I don't even know if that was the real reason for the game's exclusion from Patreon. Was it? I try to follow the thread, but there are so many messages every day that I get lost in the information.

I hope the Life Model scene stays on Subscribestar and maybe Shopie will continue teaching about sex education by showing the last part of its body that hasn't been explored yet: the vagina.

Do you think that's possible or is this part definitively abandoned?
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I'm starting to think this is a move from the dev trying to get on Steam and has nothing to do with Patreon because the Aiden route still exists and rape is also against Patreon's rules.

How often has Patreon let a creator/game back on after being completely axed?
 
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